Under the surface, Between the hot volcanoes, Beyond the vast sea plane, lies the great
utopia of
Atlantis. With the competitive under water polo, and sea horse races,
Atlantis is the Mecca of underwater civilizatio
n. Poseidon, the king of Atlantis and god of the sea, rules with an iron fist.
But the people there are very quite and civil, there are no cars because well, they live underwater
and all have tails.
5 comments:
Undawatta, sounds like a cool place lol nice job
I wish I could live in atlantis, and have tails and play underwater polo
I like the mythology you used in this assignment. Do they eat freeze pops in atlantis?
Wouldn't it just be polo? instead of water polo seeing as though they live underwater lol
Yo I totally agree with what Mrs. ladd said when she was reading it out loud in class. Everything is really freaking good and excellent. Very descriptive and it paints a picture in my mind man. The only party I didn't really think was as good would be the ending because it just went down hill from there...sorry but it's still awesome.
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